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Hurt me and I'll cry,
Hurt me and I'll bleed,
Hurt me and I'll die,
Hurt me, you will see.

Hurt me, I can't sleep,
Hurt me, I can't eat,
Hurt me, I can't concentrate,
Hurt me, I can't retreat.

Hurt me, I won't hurt back,
Hurt me, I won't leave,
Hurt me, I'll love you still,
Hurt me, I'll still believe.

Hurt me, I'll say "sorry,"
Hurt me, I'll take it on me,
Hurt me 'cause I'm used to it,
Hurt me! Hurt me! Please!

Hurt me and I'm yours,
Hurt me just once more,
Hurt me so much that,
I can't hurt anymore...
©2004-2009 ~fungusamongme
:iconfungusamongme:

Author's Comments

Umm. this is obviously sarcastic. it's just about being hurt. emotionally and mentally. and maybe a little physically. but it's kind of about how much of a sucker i am. i can be treated like shit or screwed over, and it doesn't matter, cuz i would still love them. i'm a sucker for love, what can i say? and i get hurt because of it...

I had a bunch more poetry on here, but I took it all off except for this one. It was someone's favorite, so I didn't erase it. If you want to read any of my other stuff, ask me and i'll give you a different site dedicated to my writing. Thanks.

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:iconshinyraccoon:
there was so much anger and expression in that poem, I love the rhythm. it reminded me also of BDSM for some reason, i think it was the "Hurt me and I'm yours,"

i really like this :) Well Done ^______^
:iconfungusamongme:
Thanks so much for your comment! :D i don't know what BDSM means tho... lol. if you could help me with that, that'd be super. thanks again! :D

*maddie
:iconshinyraccoon:
lol, look it up on Urbandictionary.com
:iconfungusamongme:
oooooo. well... lol. maybe it's a little of that, too. ;)

you learn something new every day...

*maddie
:iconthesweetestsounds:
this is really good! there is so much emotion behind it. wow..

--
..*..--cath--..*..

God gave us a flame and a passion
to warm lonely souls, not burn them up
Actions speak louder than words

:aww:
:iconfungusamongme:
thanks. :D and thanks for the favorite! how exciting. lol. yeah, this poem is a favorite of mine because it is very emotional and means a lot to me. becauuuuse i'm a jackass. lol. anyway, thanks for the comment and the fave! SCORE!

*maddie
:iconthesweetestsounds:
haha yep! it really is an awesome poem!

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..*..--cath--..*..

God gave us a flame and a passion
to warm lonely souls, not burn them up
Actions speak louder than words

:aww:
:iconlemari:
I love you Madison.

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